If my monsters are imagined, why do they trigger the motion sensor lights?

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  • <In Another World with Household Spells> Volume 3 - There are 3-4 shotacon references in the volume (like when describing a classmate, she says that he’s too old for her taste, etc.). If they were to remove those completely unnecessary parts, it would be an okay series. They don’t add anything to the plot at all. All they do is make MC unlikable. I am still unsure whether this is a problem with the translation or not. In the west the term “shotacon” has a clear sexual connotation, but I don’t get that from MC here at all in the context. I think using the shotacon term in the translation might be an error since there is a different meaning over here. To put it differently, the use of the term makes you expect Rudeus from Mushoku Tensei, but the prose and actions of the MC give you Takanashi from Working!. As I said, it’s kinda unnecessary and sticks out negatively in an otherwise good series.

    <Cooking with Wild Game> Volume 31 - End of the Observers Arc. I didn’t like this arc much, but I’m looking forward to the next arc since EDA is hyping it up in the Afterword. As a sidenote, I wish the illustrator would get his shit together again. Illustrations have become so rough and off-model. Look at this volume’s cover

    Cover Vol 31

    and then compare it to volume 3, for example

    Cover Volume 3

    (same peopleon the cover). Usually, the illustrations get better with time, but I consider this a step back. This is my favorite still-running series, so I wish the illustrations would get more care.

    <Isekai Tensei: Recruited to Another World> Volume 12 - I don’t have much to say about this volume. List the last couple of volumes, it’s kind of boring. Feels like the series is treading water and the author is just trying to get something onto the page to fill the page requirements for a volume. Go into the dungeon with a different party. Then go into the same dungeon solo. Then go into the same dungeon again with MC’s own party. Then start discussing marriage with the in-laws. Then discuss the marriage with the royals. Then discuss the marriage with Mc’s grandparent. Then discuss the marriage with your close friends. Then discuss the marriage with another group of friends. Then, announce the marriage officially at a gala. Then discuss the marriage with the group of girls they had kept it secret from. And so on and so on. It’s boring to read the same thing again and again, and it honestly feels like a chore.


  • had an idea for an arc, and then after the arc was like “whelp… now what?

    It’s what I always describe as “the story leading the author” type of writing. I have the mental image of a small kids being dragged around by a hyperactive, large dog trying to hold onto the leash for dear god. No clear say about where the story should go to and more often than not it really shows in how hard they fall after the first few volumes. Isekai Smartphone is one of the worst offenders from the top my head. On the other hand it really shows when a series follows a clear outlined path and gets only better with each new volume (Bookworm, Silent Witch).






  • To hear that there’s an overarching plot bumps it up a few notches.

    Even better. It’s an overarching plot that progresses without the protagonist. Too often, side characters seem to stop existing the moment the main character’s gaze is pointed somewhere else. Like a NPC in a bad video game. In Silent Witch, the overarching plot is progressing without any MC input, and she is just made aware of it in hindsight. Things happening behind the scenes become clearer with each volume but they are not things that MC has any active role in. It’s more like the actions MC takes are casting ripples, and those ripples have an effect on the big subplot. It’s good and I want to see where this is going. MC is also getting a lot less annoying in the later volumes. I initially dropped the first volume because I hate timid characters, but I’m happy that I picked it up again. Definitely one of the better series.



  • <Chronicles of an Aristocrat Reborn in Another World> Vol. 1 - Had deja vu since the prologue and turns out this is the LN of the 2023 anime “The Aristocrat’s Otherworldly Adventure: Serving Gods Who Go Too Far”. I dropped the LN once I realised it’s the same because I didn’t really enjoy the anime.

    <Secrets of the Silent Witch> Vol. 7 - I really love how the series has a main plot that is steadily continuing forward without falling into the LN trap of just idling to fill as many volumes as possible. This feels a lot like Bookworm in that regard. And not just because there is a main plot, but also in the way it feels like it’s well thought out in advance and not just what the author comes up with in the moment. It’s also a good one that keeps me wondering what might happen next. And speaking of the overall plot, in this volume, the picture just became a lot clearer.

    <Heir to a Monstermancer> Volume 1 - Male MC is unnecessarily prickly towards female MC up to the point where it’s actually annoying and off-putting. He fights a monster in the woods, gets almost killed, and she saves him, reattaches his arm, and all he does is verbally attack her every chance he gets because she’s too beautiful for him to cope. Like a little kid in Kindergarten who pulls on the hair of the girl he likes. It’s not behaviour I want to read about from a fully grown adventurer. The second chapter is great, though. I think it was that chapter that made it win an award, and the reason it was picked up for publication. So if anyone gives the series a read, wait until you finish the second chapter before making a judgment.

    <The Wicked Princess and The Twelve Eyes: The Legendary Villainess and Her Elite Assassins> - Okay, let’s play through my thoughts during the first page:

    “SERENA ROSENBERG, I HEREBY BREAK OFF MY engagement with you!” a loud voice boomed. The Rosewood Academy’s graduation party, a grand and festive affair, was also a means for the royals and nobles enrolled at the school to make their societal debuts. I was in attendance when Crown Prince Edward declared that he would be breaking off our engagement.”

    Oh God, another one of those… I think I’ve read a hundred of the same novels by now.

    Half a page later:

    “The king cast judgment upon me, and I was sentenced to death. My harsh sentence was due to the overexaggeration of the little pranks that I’d played on the saintess. I mean, all I’d done was try to drop a flowerpot on her head from the second floor, mix some sort of drug into tea to force her to drink it, hire a ruffian to plan a kidnapping, feign an accident to run her over with a carriage, and hire an assassin take her out!”

    Oh? OOoohhh? An actual villainess and not just someone framed by the Prince’s new love interest? You got my attention now!

    Ending Spoiler

    In the end, it goes the same way as always, though. MC has a change of heart and becomes “good”. Just as in every Star Wars game ever that promised that we could play the Empire side. But it’s done gradually here and wasn’t as jarring as I feared it would be.




  • <Take These Talents Elsewhere: A Delightful Demotion to the Countryside> Volume 1 - See this post.

    <The Abandoned Reincarnation Sage: Building a Mighty Empire With Monsters Within the Monsters’ Forest> Volume 02 - some higher powers start to stir shit up and MC’s monster village of Beresdral is attacked by a human army. The volume isn’t bad, but there is some strange pacing. Some leading-up fights are unnecessarily lengthy and detailed, while more “boss” type of fights where you would expect a bit more hype and tension are quickly done and over with.

    <Death March to the Parallel World Rhapsody> Vol. 24 - Terrible volume. Just a single mention of Karion and Urion in a byline. Makes the volume barely worth the ink. Also, I guess Hiro Ainana is losing his patience with people calling it a harem because in this volume he isspelling it out twice and very clearly that Satou is not interested in anyone other than Aaze. I mean it was always that way but it hadn’t been spelled out that clearly if memory serves.